By James Dashner
Prompt: Write about how one character feels. Write about a time you felt that way
The main character Thomas felt a lot of anxiety when the walls of the maze were coming down because there were so many people in the maze ranging from babies to old men and women and he thought that it would be all of his fault if all of the people in the glade died. He thought that it was his fault because he was the one that escaped wicked so they were finding new test subjects to work on and they gathered this many people to pick out a select few.
One time that I felt a lot of anxiety was when my dad grabbed me of the couch and said that he heard a single shot from a gun go off. we live in the country in the middle of nowhere so we keep the front and back door unlocked I mean who is going to drive 20 minutes out of town to rob somebody. So we ran up into the attic and it has a window but we were in such a frantic hurry we did not lock the door that leads up to the attic oh and just to top that off me and my dad left the phone down stairs.
We sat there and I guess we talked pretty much all night long until we both just fell sound asleep. The time that I felt the most anxiety was when my dad walked because it sounded like there was someone down stairs walking towards the attic door. but we made it through the night and it's a pretty cool experience to tell to my friends.
Wow...that is a crazy experience. Please go back and revise your writing. It is hard to comprehend at times.
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