One of the best things about your butterfly is that you have your opinion on why your author wrote the poem; author's purpose. Many Other Perople didn't do that and that's why I liked why you did that. I also think it is creative of you to put in what the Jews probably looked like after they died. Was the broken glass a part of your idea or was it in the poem to represent broken glass too?
Hey Michael! Good job on your butterfly, I especially liked the body with the broken glass. Was the broken glass mentioned throughout the poem to represent a soul being broken? Was this your idea? My brother had a similar idea of a soul being represented as stained glass and once it's complete, it's beautiful, but broken it makes no sense and it's dangerous. I like the idea of having the Nazi on top because they were more powerful than the Jews. This idea reminded me of Nick's butterfly because he had the Nazi symbol overlapping the Jewish star. Along with Justin, I liked your idea of having the Jew passing by after he died. I thought it was really creative of you to put your input inside how they moght look passing away or moving on from Earth. One thing I do suggest is copying and pasting your poem so your readers can reflect on the poem to see the certain parts you based the butterfly on. Overall, great job Michael:)
Hey Michael. I would like to start off by saying that the drawings look really cool. I like the two pictures on the right. I like the one of the Nazi because I think you did a good job of implying that the Nazi party had that power over the Jews. I like the one on the bottom because it accurately describes how a lot of prisoners lost their humanity in the concentration camps. It sort of reminded my off when Wiesel saw his father get slapped and didn't even blink. One thing that I would check for is grammar issues. There are a couple in the bottom right tags. Other than that great job!
First of all, I want to congratulate you on the success of your butterfly! It really turned out great and I'm impressed with the quality and time that was obviously put into this project. More specifically, I really liked the drawings that you included and I also really enjoyed interpreting the meaning behind what you drew. In a way, these drawings inspired me to try to be more artistic, even though I've never liked to color, draw, or participate in anything else involving art. The only mistake that I noticed, which Siari pointed out, was a couple grammar errors. I thought the broken glass aspect was really thoughtful and interesting, and I think you did a fantastic job on your project.
Hey Michael! First off, great job on your butterfly. It looks great! Something that I thought was unique was how you made the middle section of the butterfly broken glass. In order to represent the broken souls of the Jews. This reminded me of the night of broken glass, how many of the Jew's stores were destroyed. Which also made many of the Jews very broken on the inside, as those were the places that they made money to feed their families. I also liked how you drew the Jewish man, and how you explained that he went to heaven, but was sad because he never got a proper burial. Overall amazing job!
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ReplyDeleteOne of the best things about your butterfly is that you have your opinion on why your author wrote the poem; author's purpose. Many Other Perople didn't do that and that's why I liked why you did that. I also think it is creative of you to put in what the Jews probably looked like after they died. Was the broken glass a part of your idea or was it in the poem to represent broken glass too?
DeleteHey Michael! Good job on your butterfly, I especially liked the body with the broken glass. Was the broken glass mentioned throughout the poem to represent a soul being broken? Was this your idea? My brother had a similar idea of a soul being represented as stained glass and once it's complete, it's beautiful, but broken it makes no sense and it's dangerous. I like the idea of having the Nazi on top because they were more powerful than the Jews. This idea reminded me of Nick's butterfly because he had the Nazi symbol overlapping the Jewish star. Along with Justin, I liked your idea of having the Jew passing by after he died. I thought it was really creative of you to put your input inside how they moght look passing away or moving on from Earth. One thing I do suggest is copying and pasting your poem so your readers can reflect on the poem to see the certain parts you based the butterfly on. Overall, great job Michael:)
ReplyDeleteHey Michael. I would like to start off by saying that the drawings look really cool. I like the two pictures on the right. I like the one of the Nazi because I think you did a good job of implying that the Nazi party had that power over the Jews. I like the one on the bottom because it accurately describes how a lot of prisoners lost their humanity in the concentration camps. It sort of reminded my off when Wiesel saw his father get slapped and didn't even blink. One thing that I would check for is grammar issues. There are a couple in the bottom right tags. Other than that great job!
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, I want to congratulate you on the success of your butterfly! It really turned out great and I'm impressed with the quality and time that was obviously put into this project. More specifically, I really liked the drawings that you included and I also really enjoyed interpreting the meaning behind what you drew. In a way, these drawings inspired me to try to be more artistic, even though I've never liked to color, draw, or participate in anything else involving art. The only mistake that I noticed, which Siari pointed out, was a couple grammar errors. I thought the broken glass aspect was really thoughtful and interesting, and I think you did a fantastic job on your project.
ReplyDeleteHey Michael! First off, great job on your butterfly. It looks great! Something that I thought was unique was how you made the middle section of the butterfly broken glass. In order to represent the broken souls of the Jews. This reminded me of the night of broken glass, how many of the Jew's stores were destroyed. Which also made many of the Jews very broken on the inside, as those were the places that they made money to feed their families. I also liked how you drew the Jewish man, and how you explained that he went to heaven, but was sad because he never got a proper burial. Overall amazing job!
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