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Author: John Steinback
by:Michael Hoover
Prompt:"From your brainstorming session, choose at least two conflicts to explore more in depth in this blog. Be sure to include textual evidence and support and also identify the effect that the conflict has had on the plot so far."
The first conflict that I thought was big was Curley's wife, I think this because wherever she goes Curley thinks that she is doing something and she is always starting trouble with other people for example she said to crooks that she could have him killed so easily "Shut it nigger, you know I can have you hung so easily that it aint even funny!" this shows that she is causing trouble a lot to the other people. The conflict that this has had on the plot is that it makes Curley out to get everyone because he thinks that she wants every person that she talks to.
The second conflict that I thought was big was Lennie's problem with touching soft things. I thought this because since he likes it so much he touched Curley's wife's hair and then he would not let go when she started screaming and he held her mouth because he said that he would not be able to tend to the rabbits if George found out so he accidentally killed her. That is why I think that a big conflict in the story was lennies addiction to touch soft things because it gets him in so much trouble.
Michael - There are many errors and it distracts the reader from the content you have written. Please revise.
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